profusia
(Worcestershire)
Sunday 18 Jun 2017, 6:05pm
Is Dry India meant to sound like the record is stuck, or is there something wrong with the track? lol I'm assuming its intentional - just makes it hard to listen to without the additional components that I assume you expect someone to put with it.
Push is just too repetitive to get to the end of, sorry. I assume it just repeats ad nauseum?
Pool has some much more interesting moments which remind me of jazzy brassy US TV soundtracks of the 60s, but again the track keeps returning to an incredibly repetitive line which can't really be described as a hook. I'm not into rap but I presume you expect someone to rap over the repeating line?
Venue starts off much more promising and feels like it could develop into something. Might make a nice intro to something.
I guess if these are just to be beats to be incorporated into something bigger, maybe rapped over or between, then some of them could work nicely. Clearly there are some nice moments going on, although Dry India and Push left me cold I'm afraid, particularly tonally. I'm sure others will disagree.
I would ask one thing though Ben: If you are asking people to review and comment on your stuff, please be kind enough to take the time to review and comment on other people's submissions here - its only fair and community spirited